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The tides, slowly,
ebb and flow
gently smoothing
the roughs of my soul...

The past is just a memory
The future: just a distant dream
The present: blissful reverie
Take me far, far, away...

Let the rivers flow, freely
Back into the ocean's womb
Let the streams, gracefully,
Filter through the soft Earth soil...

Take me, with you,
I don't care where,
Carry me along,
I won't ask questions
(I don't need answers)
I will, simply,
let go of
me.
©2008-2009 ~Filosofia
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Author's Comments

Find peace, and you will be happy.

Thank you for reading =)

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:iconbeyondtheobvious2012:
ahhh....that was wonderfully refreshing...fantastic job!...check out my poems plz if u get the chance :)...im relatively new

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"A writer is someone who has taught his mind to misbehave." -Oscar Wilde
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OOh i'm very glad you liked it!!! =) it FELT refreshing. Thanks so much for your beautiful comment!!! :hug:

Sure thing =) I LOVE reading new poetry =)

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When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace. - Jimi Hendrix
:iconbeyondtheobvious2012:
np...ur poem was well worth it...and thank you so much xD

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"A writer is someone who has taught his mind to misbehave." -Oscar Wilde
:iconca4xxx:
I can agree to that! Beautifully said :clap: :hug:
:iconfilosofia:
=D I'm very glad you liked ittt!!! :hug:

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When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace. - Jimi Hendrix
:iconx-outsider-x:
Ohhh this is good. And relateable. I see you understand completely :)

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That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.

~St. John of the Cross
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=D

I wrote it while I was, literally, laying back in my chair and listening to this beautiful music. This is what I want to feel. =)

Thank you!!! :hug:

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When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace. - Jimi Hendrix
:iconaleid:
wow, amazing. :|

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"I wanted to live deep and suck out all the marrow of life"
-David Thoreau
:iconfilosofia:
=D Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it =)

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When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace. - Jimi Hendrix

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